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Recommendation: Revisions Required

Greetings and regards
This article is about modeling the energy consumption of a steel furnace. The structure of the article is weak. The article does not guide the reader well. Please consider the following points in your review:
1- It is mentioned that the required data was obtained experimentally. This point is not mentioned in the article. Are the data determined by the authors?
2- The simulation results are not well presented. For example, Figures (8) and (14) are incomplete, and the axes are not well defined.
3- Some of the text seems to be a direct translation. For example, see the first paragraph of the introduction. It is written that in this study, which study is meant?
4- What do you mean by MLP model?
5- This sentence is given in Section 4 of the reference.
In fact, the values ​​of the regression coefficients here are equal to and can even outperform previous advanced techniques [35].
If you have noticed this from the simulation results, why is the reference given?
6- What do you mean by the proposed model? Is the goal the same as the computational method, or is a model considered?
7- The reference information is written incompletely.
8- The text needs to be rewritten. For example, [17] appears in the middle of a sentence, without being referred to.
9- Use new references. The review of the article should be better stated.
10- Draw a flowchart of the simulation program and how to determine the shapes.
Wishing you health and happiness.

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